Guest guest Posted February 17, 2008 Report Posted February 17, 2008 Here is a piece of poetry I wrote in 2007 about fibromyalgia. Some of you have read it but some are new here. Maybe it will be of some benefit to repost. Love and hugs, Debra V. --------------------------------- Date: Sat, 17 Mar 2007 08:05:31 -0700 From: ladybug75901@... Subject: Fwd: My poem-- Fibro-- The Invisible Hell To: revgwyork@... debra van ness wrote: Date: Sat, 17 Mar 2007 07:55:27 -0700 (PDT) Subject: My poem-- Fibro-- The Invisible Hell To: Fibromyalgia_Support_Group Dear friends, Last night I was up at 2 am. This piece of poetry came to me and I wrote it. Maybe you can all relate. I have not written any poetry in years, but as I said, it just came to me. Fibro-- The Invisible Hell I'll creep into your life when you are young and carefree, so subtly you won't know or even recognize me. I'll start with a little tingle, perhaps some numbness or a little pain--- I'll kick you when you are down, when it's cold or starts to rain. Ignore me and explain the little things away---- but as the days go by I'll settle in to stay. Fibromyalgia such a medical term---- for something so sinister, cruel and so stern Tell your doctor I am here--- he won't be able to see. No tests, no broken bones, no lab to prove it's me. When you awaken in the morning after years I have progressed, you'll be hurt and feel so stiff you'll hardly get dressed. I thrive on every crisis or pitall of emotion---- I'll drown your soul like silent waves crashing on the ocean. You know they'll call you crazy, insufficient, even lazy. Your mind will be a fog at times- your memory even hazy. The pain will get intense as slowly pass the days, then you'll have to pay attention, I won't go away. The little hints of tingling will turn to burning hell---- You'll think you've lost your mind in my silent evil spell. You'll feel so bone deep tired, I'll be worse than the flu---- But you look so healthy, I'll be sure they don't believe you. I'll atack you in your sleep like you never went to bed---- Your family may believe I'm just inside your head. They say you don't have pain; It can't be that bad. Some aspirin and some sleep fixed the flu that they had. Am I a virus, a chemical, or something that you lack? Be assured that if I leave, I'll always be back. At times you may return to what you use to be. Enjoy it when you can because I will not set you free. I'll take away time with your children, rob you of your joy and smile. Send away your friends and family--- I'm back for a while. Fibromyalgia is my name for those that believe I am for real---- Such medical terminology for the way I cheat and steal. By Debra Van Ness, (a fibromite) --------------------------------- It's here! Your new message! Get new email alerts with the free Yahoo! Toolbar. --------------------------------- Looking for earth-friendly autos? Browse Top Cars by " Green Rating " at Yahoo! Autos' Green Center. --------------------------------- Never miss a thing. Make Yahoo your homepage. Quote
Guest guest Posted February 17, 2008 Report Posted February 17, 2008 Dear Debra, What a wonderful poem. May I use it with your signature as author. Blessings and hugs, Annie --------------------------------- Looking for last minute shopping deals? Find them fast with Yahoo! Search. Quote
Guest guest Posted February 17, 2008 Report Posted February 17, 2008 Date: Sat, 17 Mar 2007 07:55:27 -0700 (PDT) > > Subject: My poem-- Fibro-- The Invisible Hell > To: Fibromyalgia_Support_Group > > Dear friends, > > Last night I was up at 2 am. This piece of poetry came to me and I wrote it. Maybe you can all relate. I have not written any poetry in years, but as I said, it just came to me. > > Fibro-- The Invisible Hell > > I'll creep into your life when you are young and carefree, > so subtly you won't know or even recognize me. > I'll start with a little tingle, perhaps some numbness or a > little pain--- > I'll kick you when you are down, when it's cold or starts to rain. > Ignore me and explain the little things away---- > but as the days go by I'll settle in to stay. > Fibromyalgia such a medical term---- > for something so sinister, cruel and so stern > Tell your doctor I am here--- he won't be able to see. > No tests, no broken bones, no lab to prove it's me. > When you awaken in the morning after years I have progressed, > you'll be hurt and feel so stiff you'll hardly get dressed. > I thrive on every crisis or pitall of emotion---- > I'll drown your soul like silent waves crashing on the ocean. > You know they'll call you crazy, insufficient, even lazy. > Your mind will be a fog at times- your memory even hazy. > The pain will get intense as slowly pass the days, > then you'll have to pay attention, I won't go away. > The little hints of tingling will turn to burning hell---- > You'll think you've lost your mind in my silent evil spell. > You'll feel so bone deep tired, I'll be worse than the flu---- > But you look so healthy, I'll be sure they don't believe you. > I'll atack you in your sleep like you never went to bed---- > Your family may believe I'm just inside your head. > They say you don't have pain; It can't be that bad. > Some aspirin and some sleep fixed the flu that they had. > Am I a virus, a chemical, or something that you lack? > Be assured that if I leave, I'll always be back. > At times you may return to what you use to be. > Enjoy it when you can because I will not set you free. > I'll take away time with your children, rob you of your joy and smile. > Send away your friends and family--- I'm back for a while. > Fibromyalgia is my name for those that believe I am for real---- > Such medical terminology for the way I cheat and steal. > > By Debra Van Ness, > > (a fibromite) > > > Wow Debra you hit the nail on the head that is exactly how it is too!!!!! God bless Leanne > --------------------------------- > It's here! Your new message! > Get new email alerts with the free Yahoo! Toolbar. > > > --------------------------------- > Looking for earth-friendly autos? > Browse Top Cars by " Green Rating " at Yahoo! Autos' Green Center. > > > --------------------------------- > Never miss a thing. Make Yahoo your homepage. > > Quote
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