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I finished this today. I fleshed it out a bit..hope you like it.

Regards~

Jacque

Distal RNY

Drs. Fox and Oh

Beginning BMI 50.0

Current BMI 21.0

Prejudice

I trudge along, always out of step

Disgust, derision in furtive glances

Never holding doors for me

Slamming closed before my face

I could never measure up

To the perfect woman's form

Tell me why it was they cared?

Why such prejudice?

First of all, I must be lazy

Look how I've gone to pot

Can such sloth be really clean?

" Put that fork down, use your brain! "

How could they know of all my diets

Beginning at eight-years-old?

When SHE said, " you are way too fat! "

Destroying my budding self worth.

I starved and it hurt just to make HER proud

It ruined my growing body

How could SHE know, how would I know?

Deprivation became my life

Outward signs belied

How could they understand

The profound torment I was feeling

wracked in agony?

Inside this vile and ugly blob

Resides a real live person

Who really ever looked to see

The more deprived, the more of me?

My solution was quite drastic

Salvation in a surgeon's knife

Rearranging my inward parts

Promising a life

From this huge confinement

" Real me " stepped out

For once I would see freedom

From this stigma known as obesity

Women now look at me

Men will even wink

Doors are now held open

Thin makes me part of the human race?

Look now, they do, but do they see

Who it is that makes me, me?

In my heart, I'm still the same

Seems the joke's on them

They look, but still they cannot see

That fat eight-year-old

Still lives inside of me!

Jdm 1/03

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