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I jotted this down this morning, as my creative juices have been flowing a

bit of late. Understand it's not a finished draft, and requires some

polishing, but I felt I wanted to share it with you as it initially came out.

Not the pretty, more artistic version that hopefully it will become.

Prejudice

Always out of step

derision in their glances

doors slammed in my face

I don't measure up

to the world's perfect image

why such prejudice?

Stupid and lazy

isn't it obvious?

Likely I stink

Who understands

the torment I'm feeling

wracked in agony?

Inside this vile blob

a real person resides

myself

From this huge shell

I emerged

a much smaller me

Now seems I'm loved

but the joke is on them

I never changed

I'm the same as I was before!

jdm 1/03

Regards~

Jacque

Distal RNY

Drs. Fox and Oh

Beginning BMI 50.0

Current BMI 21.0

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In a message dated 1/23/2003 7:50:17 PM Eastern Standard Time,

jacquemil@... writes:

> Prejudice

>

The poem, hit me inside my being. Thanks for sharing. What a talented group

here.

However, buying and selling people, is slave trading. Maybe we should give

Ceep a chance to vote (not that her vote would count, oh oh now I have

developed an evil Fay)

Fay Bayuk -

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