Guest guest Posted October 4, 2011 Report Share Posted October 4, 2011 , I really like your flyer. Thanks for sharing it with us. Could I make just a few suggestions as a previous English teacher? 1. Breastfeeding should be one word. Sometimes you have it as two, sometimes as one.2. Get rid of the apostrophe in Mom’s.3. Make you list items agree grammatically. For instance if one starts with a verb, they all should, if possible. Your flyer is really nice, so just take these suggestions as a few nit-picky improvements, please! Becky , IBCLCMilky WayLa Plata, MD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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