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A poem

> The changes we've seen with Ben, since doing chelation are subtle -

emotional opening up, and connectedness, and depth. He wrote a poem

yesterday, I thought I'd share with you all:

>

> Time

> Lost

> I feel myself slip away into darkness

> But one spec of light shows through

> Brightly shining

> Growing

> A chance

> If only I could reach it I could be free

> Of the shadow in my eye

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>

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The changes we've seen with Ben, since doing chelation are subtle - emotional

opening up, and connectedness, and depth. He wrote a poem yesterday, I thought

I'd share with you all:

Time

Lost

I feel myself slip away into darkness

But one spec of light shows through

Brightly shining

Growing

A chance

If only I could reach it I could be free

Of the shadow in my eye

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Ann,

Please pass this on to Ben for me...Thanks...Jack

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Ben,

I liked your poem a lot.

I liked you poem, particularly the last line. I hope you can write more about

that " shadow in your eye. " I think writing more poetry would help you to get

rid of it. I would be glad to exchange some poems with you...

Jack

Ann Greenberg wrote:

The changes we've seen with Ben, since doing chelation are subtle - emotional

opening up, and connectedness, and depth. He wrote a poem yesterday, I thought

I'd share with you all:

Time

Lost

I feel myself slip away into darkness

But one spec of light shows through

Brightly shining

Growing

A chance

If only I could reach it I could be free

Of the shadow in my eye

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Ann,

WOW is right. Who old is he?

Marla

> The changes we've seen with Ben, since doing chelation are subtle -

emotional opening up, and connectedness, and depth. He wrote a

poem yesterday, I thought I'd share with you all:

>

> Time

> Lost

> I feel myself slip away into darkness

> But one spec of light shows through

> Brightly shining

> Growing

> A chance

> If only I could reach it I could be free

> Of the shadow in my eye

>

>

>

>

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Ben,

I love your poem. I think my son Luke would write something similar if he

could. Thanks for sharing.

Kathy Harvey

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& gt; & gt; But one spec of light shows through

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& gt; & gt; Growing

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