Re: Opinions Please! Off-topic

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Hi Sue,

I like them both, but I like the first one better, because I think our children give their whole heart to those they love. In fact, the other day, Sara said to me, "Mom, I love you with my whole heart." It made my day!

Marcia

Mom to Sara (DS) and 7 and Lucas 11

[Guest guest]

Wow Sue! I love them both!!! What a wonderful gift.

I wish I were a creative as you!!

Judi

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[Guest guest]

I like 2 better ....Merry

--- zmadad@... wrote:

> Sorry to bother you with this, but I need some

> opinions. I wanted to write a

> short poem for the boy's teachers for Valentine's

> Day. I have two,

> essentially the same, but I can't decide. Here they

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> Poem #1

> My heart

> is all I have to give. To

> you this special Valentine's

> Day. Please accept my

> simple gift. Love

> won't grow 'till

> you give it

> away!

> ©

> Sue Saladino 1/25/2002

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> A small piece of

> my heart is all I have.

> To give to you on this special

> day. I hope you'll accept

> my simple gift. Love

> doesn't grow until

> you give it

> away!

> ©

> Sue Saladino 1/25/2002

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> Thanks to anyone who takes time to help me out!

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remission,congenital heart defect,congestive heart failure,chronic lung disease,

asthma,tube fed,etc,; Kate 7 (neonatal abstinence syndrome, ADHD); Jaykob 5

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[Guest guest]

I love 'em both. I think I may favor #2 though.

If I were their teachers, I'd cry when I recieved that!

Cheers!

Sara

--On Friday, January 25, 2002, 12:15 PM +0000 zmadad@... wrote:

> Sorry to bother you with this, but I need some opinions. I wanted to

> write a short poem for the boy's teachers for Valentine's Day. I have

> two, essentially the same, but I can't decide. Here they are:

>

> Poem #1

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> My heart

> is all I have to give. To

> you this special Valentine's

> Day. Please accept my

> simple gift. Love

> won't grow 'till

> you give it

> away!

> ©

> Sue Saladino 1/25/2002

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> A small piece of

> my heart is all I have.

> To give to you on this special

> day. I hope you'll accept

> my simple gift. Love

> doesn't grow until

> you give it

> away!

> ©

> Sue Saladino 1/25/2002

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> Thanks to anyone who takes time to help me out!

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[Guest guest]

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> I like them both, but I like the first one better, because I think our

> children give their whole heart to those they love. In fact, the other

> day, Sara said to me, " Mom, I love you with my whole heart. " It made my

> day!

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! That Sara is too sweet! And she made me

change my mind.... I favor #1 now! )

Sara

[Guest guest]

Hi Sue, I really liked both of your poems. If I have to pick one for

the best, I think I'd pick #2 though. Hope this helps.

[Guest guest]

I like them both, but if I had to pick I would say # 2 flows better.

mom to twins Arielle and Annemieke (ds) 29 months

[Guest guest]

Sue

Both are nice but I like the most # 2.

Mabel, mom to Carolina, Cristian and a-ds 34 months

>From: zmadad@...

>Reply-Multiples-DS

>Multiples-DS

>Subject: Opinions Please! Off-topic

>Date: Fri, 25 Jan 2002 12:15:36 EST

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>Sorry to bother you with this, but I need some opinions. I wanted to write

>a

>short poem for the boy's teachers for Valentine's Day. I have two,

>essentially the same, but I can't decide. Here they are:

>

>Poem #1

> My heart

>is all I have to give. To

>you this special Valentine's

>Day. Please accept my

>simple gift. Love

>won't grow 'till

>you give it

>away!

>©

>Sue Saladino 1/25/2002

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>Poem #2

>A small piece of

> my heart is all I have.

>To give to you on this special

>day. I hope you'll accept

>my simple gift. Love

>doesn't grow until

>you give it

>away!

>©

>Sue Saladino 1/25/2002

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>Thanks to anyone who takes time to help me out!

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